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[NICHOLL FELLOWSHIPS in SCREENWRITING]
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http://www.oscars.org/academy/nichollindex.html
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\begin_layout General
Formatted text courtesy of Ann Garretson
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http://www.halcyon.com/aga
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\begin_layout General
Copyright 1998 by the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences
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----------
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\begin_layout General
FILE NOTES
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----------
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\begin_layout General
Source: Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences (A.M.P.A.S.)
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\begin_layout General
- The NICHOLL FELLOWSHIPS in SCREENWRITING
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\begin_layout General
- http://www.oscars.org/nicholl/index.html
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\begin_layout General
- E-mail: Greg Beal, gbeal@oscars.org
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\begin_layout General
File Info: April, 1998 (online)
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\begin_layout General
- http://www.oscars.org/nicholl/format_a.txt
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\begin_layout General
- View in a monospaced font -- preferably 12-point Courier.
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\begin_layout General
Copyright 1998 by the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences
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----------
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\begin_layout General
Permission to use this script as a \SpecialChar LyX
 example file was kindly granted by Greg
 Beal, gbeal@oscars.org.
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\begin_layout General
I added a few lines at the end of script about binding.
 The original script ended with the words 
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\end_inset

I'd never let you miss a meal.
\begin_inset Quotes erd
\end_inset

 There were also references to tabs, which don't exist in \SpecialChar LyX
, so I made minor
 changes in the text.
 Apologies and kudos to Ann Garretson.
 Be sure to thank her when you get your Oscar.
 
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\begin_layout General
Garst R.
 Reese
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\begin_layout General
reese@isn.net
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\begin_inset Newpage newpage
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\begin_layout Title
FOR A FEW DAYS MORE
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\begin_layout Author
by
\begin_inset Newline newline
\end_inset

April Rider
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\begin_layout General
\begin_inset VSpace vfill
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\begin_layout Right Address
April Rider
\begin_inset Newline newline
\end_inset

555 George St.
 NNW
\begin_inset Newline newline
\end_inset

Kaplan, ND 77777 
\begin_inset Newline newline
\end_inset

999-999-9999
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\begin_layout General
\begin_inset Newpage newpage
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\end_layout

\begin_layout FADE IN:
\begin_inset CommandInset label
LatexCommand label
name "Joe"

\end_inset


\begin_inset CommandInset label
LatexCommand label
name "April"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout General
\begin_inset Note Note
status collapsed

\begin_layout General
Use Layout->Document
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\begin_layout General
Spacing Other to set the spacing between lines.
 A value of .85 is probably the minimum.
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\begin_layout General
\begin_inset Note Note
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\begin_layout General
To change:
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\begin_layout General

\backslash
setlength{
\backslash
dialogindent}{1in},
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\begin_layout General

\backslash
setlength{
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parenoffset}{.5in},
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\begin_layout General

\backslash
setlength{
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\begin_layout General

\backslash
setlength{
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parenLength}{2in},
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\begin_layout General

\backslash
setlength{
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\begin_layout General
click \SpecialChar TeX
 and enter new values as above.
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\begin_layout General
Parenoffset is the offset to the left of parentheticals from speaker names.
\end_layout

\begin_layout General
Speakeroffset is the offset to the right of the dialog margin, so changing
 dialogindent will automatically change the position of parentheticals and
 speaker names.
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\end_inset


\begin_inset Note Note
status collapsed

\begin_layout General
You can put your Speaker names in labels, the insert cross references to
 the labels.
 The printed version will automatically be capitalized in Speaker even if
 the label is not capped.
 This way you can use them in dialogue also, and change all references to
 your Speaker's names just by changing the label.
 
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\begin_layout General
\begin_inset ERT
status collapsed

\begin_layout Plain Layout


\backslash
setlength{
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parenLength}{1.7in}
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\begin_layout Plain Layout

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\begin_layout Plain Layout


\backslash
setlength{
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\begin_layout INT.
DRISKILL HOTEL SEMINAR ROOM - DAY
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\begin_layout Description
JOE and APRIL burst through the doors into a clean, well-lit seminar room
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\begin_layout General
\begin_inset Note Note
status collapsed

\begin_layout General
Use the description after INT.
 or EXT.
 to keep it on the same page.
 Narrative is the same, except that it allows a pagebreak before it.
 Notice that I did not use the labels for Joe and April here because they
 are upper-cased in discriptions only the first time they are used.
 You could make extra labels, but I think it would be error-prone.
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\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout Dialogue
Are we in time?
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\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout Dialogue
How could they start without us? We're the main attraction.
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\begin_layout Narrative
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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 catches his breath as he leans against the podium at the front of the room.
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\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Parenthetical
looking about the room
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\begin_layout Dialogue
We are?
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\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout Dialogue
Don't be a moron.
 You know we've been invited to Austin to discuss script format.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout Dialogue
But why is the room empty?
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\begin_layout Narrative
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 and 
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 both look out across the room -- rows of empty chairs and nary a person
 in sight.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout Dialogue
Okay, okay, don't panic.
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\begin_layout Narrative
She takes three deep breaths.
 Then she looks at her watch and smiles.
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\begin_layout Continuing

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\begin_layout Dialogue
We're an hour early.
 We should rehearse.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout Dialogue
Okay, you start.
 Margins?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Left, 1.5 inches.
 Right, 0.75 inches.
 Top, 1.0 inch to the body, 0.5 inches to the number.
 Bottom, 0.5 to 1.5 inches, depending on where the page break comes.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Page break?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout Dialogue
Right above me.
 Rules for breaking a page.
 Scene headers, like INT., remain attached to Description.
 If a page breaks between a Speaker and a one sentence Dialogue, move it
 above the Speaker.
 A long Dialogue passage would be split -- but I'll get to that later.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
What about fonts?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Courier, 12 point, 10 pitch.
 Make sure it's a non-proportional version of Courier.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Narrative
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

's grimace suggests that he's deep in thought.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
What about bold-face or italics? Or a Gothic font? I love to jazz up my
 scripts.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
No bold, no itals, no script fonts, no Gothic, no Helvetica, no Times Roman.
 Stick with Courier.
 That's the industry standard.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Oh, we're talking about industry standards?
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\begin_layout Narrative
Suddenly, 
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 bolts from behind the podium and runs out into:
\end_layout

\begin_layout INT.
DRISKILL HOTEL HALLWAY - DAY
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 glances up and down the hallway, then reaches back to open the door.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Parenthetical
calling
\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 -- come on! There's no one here.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Parenthetical
walking through the door
\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Ah, a scene heading.
 Or a slug line, as I was taught in film school.
 Always CAPPED.
 What happens if we \SpecialChar ldots

\end_layout

\begin_layout EXT.
TEXAS CAPITOL BUILDING - DAY
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 pinches himself as he stands with 
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 before the seat of Texas politics.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
How'd you do that?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
There was a cut -- from the hallway to the capitol.
 What'd you want to do -- ride in a cab?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Dialogue margins.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Left, 3.0 inches.
 Right, 2.5 inches.
 Of course, you can cheat those a tad.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
\begin_inset Note Note
status collapsed

\begin_layout General
These are from the paper edge, but you specify them from
\end_layout

\begin_layout General
the left margin using dialoglength and dialogIndent.
\end_layout

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
So, you have about 3.0 inches for each line of your dialogue?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
You've got it.
 Though you can go out another three or four spaces to the right and no
 one will hold it against you.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Narrative
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 jots down several notes on a 3 x 5 card, studies the card for a moment,
 then scribbles another note.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Parenthetical
looking up
\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
And the position of the speaker's name?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
All CAPS, and about 2.7 inches from the left margin.
 Some writers center all the speakers' names.
\end_layout

\begin_layout General
\begin_inset Note Note
status collapsed

\begin_layout General
Use More to break up a dialogue across a page boundary.
 It will put (MORE) at the bottom of the page, and insert the current speaker
 name and (CONT'D) at the top of the next page.
 You should not break mid-sentence.
\end_layout

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout More

\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Personally, I don't think it matters.
 The look of the script pages is slightly different in either case.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Hey, what happened?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
A page break appeared in the middle of my dialogue.
 You use (MORE) at the bottom of the page to show that the speaker's dialogue
 continues onto the next page.
 Then (CONT'D) next to the speaker to show that it has roots in the previous
 page.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
But not everybody uses MOREs and CONT'Ds, do they?
\end_layout

\begin_layout INT.
CAPITOL BUILDING - DAY
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 stares up into the dome.
 
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 examines the portraits of Texas governors on the nearby walls.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Some writers just plan their page ends so as to avoid them.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Parenthetical
considering
\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
What about parentheticals?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Start them about a half-inch to the left of the speaker name.
 In our case that would be at 2.2 inches from the left margin.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
And what are they for?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
For years, parentheticals were used to express emotion, the manner in which
 a speaker spoke her lines.
 Loudly, passionately, sadly, and so on.
 In recent years writers have often used them for brief bits of action.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Parenthetical
going up a stairway
\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Something like this?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Parenthetical
following him
\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Exactly.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
How wide are parentheticals?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Not very -- about 1.5 inches.
 And they should wrap to the following line when they extend beyond that
 point.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Parenthetical
pointing up to the top of the page
\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
If you place a parenthetical in the middle of a dialogue passage, it should
 remain distinct from the dialogue.
\end_layout

\begin_layout EXT.
MISSISSIPPI RIVERBOAT - NIGHT
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
A gambling boat rolls slowly along the mighty river.
 
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 and 
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 wander about its upper deck.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
I have to ask -- what happened to CUT TO:s between scenes.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Many writers still use transitions such as CUT TO: and DISSOLVE TO: between
 scenes.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Those would introduce a new scene header?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
And typically a different time and/or place.
 But many writers have dispensed with such transitions, feeling that a new
 scene header signifies a cut without the need of any additional indicator.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Narrative
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 stares out at the river.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
How did we reach the Mississippi and when did the sun set?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
If you'd like \SpecialChar ldots

\end_layout

\begin_layout EXT.
AIRPLANE - SUNSET
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
A jet liner cruises East across Texas.
\end_layout

\begin_layout INT.
AIRPLANE - SUNSET
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
A customized interior, replete with lounge chairs and sofas.
 
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 and 
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 sip margaritas.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Is this a flashback?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Or it could be tomorrow.
 Or next week.
\end_layout

\begin_layout TITLE OVER:
October 19, 1997
\end_layout

\begin_layout Continuing

\end_layout

\begin_layout General
\begin_inset Note Note
status collapsed

\begin_layout General
Selecting 
\begin_inset Quotes eld
\end_inset

Continuing
\begin_inset Quotes erd
\end_inset

 will insert the current Speaker followed by (continuing) as a parenthetical.
 Don't worry, it will look right on the printed version.
\end_layout

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
You see, a few weeks have passed.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Okay, I didn't notice.
 But I thought only DAY and NIGHT were allowed on scene headers.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Production managers would certainly prefer it that way, but many writers
 use headers as a means of showing a particular time of day, especially
 SUNRISE and SUNSET.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
So that's allowed?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
On writer's drafts, without a doubt.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
A writer's draft?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
Essentially, any draft that hasn't been paid for.
 Any draft to be sent to agents, studio execs, production companies, development
 people.
 Those are writer's drafts.
 And they all should be FIRST DRAFTs, no matter how many versions the writer
 has actually written.
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reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
You really think so?
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reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
That's my recommendation.
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\begin_layout INT.
BLUE CAMARO - DAY
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\begin_layout Description
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reference "April"

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 drives along Austin's Congress Avenue as 
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reference "Joe"

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 rides shotgun.
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reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
You speak any foreign languages?
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reference "April"

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\begin_layout Parenthetical
in French
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\begin_layout Dialogue
Why do you ask? (Pour quoi tu demandes?)
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reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
What about action scenes?
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SUDDENLY, A BLACK CADILLAC whips around a corner, racing quickly towards
 them.
 
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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 punches the accelerator and -- THE BLUE CAMARO leaps forward, leaving a
 trail of rubber.
 The Camaro takes a left, then a quick right to accelerate into -- A DARK
 ALLEY The Camaro quickly reaches a dead end, just as -- THE BLACK CADILLAC
 pulls into the alley, sealing it shut.
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\begin_layout EXT.
DRISKILL HOTEL DAY
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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 leads a dazed and confused 
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reference "Joe"

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 to the front door.
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reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
That's one way to do an action scene.
 It's a variation on the Bill Goldman style that's used by many writers.
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reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Parenthetical
coming to
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\begin_layout Dialogue
But other writers just use normal description and standard scene headers
 for action scenes, don't they?
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reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
Many do.
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\begin_layout INT.
DRISKILL HOTEL ENTRANCE HALL -- PHONE BOOTH - DAY
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\begin_layout Description
A slightly less dazed 
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reference "Joe"

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 speaks on the phone.
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reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
I thought we were walking together.
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reference "April"

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 (O.S.)
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\begin_layout Parenthetical
filtered
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\begin_layout Dialogue
Well, we were, but I realized a phone call was needed.
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reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
You're filtered?
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\begin_layout INTERCUT

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\begin_layout EXT.
STATE CAPITOL PHONE BOOTH - DAY
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\begin_layout Description
With the dome looming large behind her, 
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 speaks into the phone.
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
Only when you hear my voice over the phone.
 Radio voices and phone calls often are filtered, though it's a convention
 that isn't used by everyone anymore.
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
Let's try something easy.
 What about page numbers?
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
Number each and every page, though you can start with page two.
 The numbers should appear in the upper right hand corner, about 0.5 inches
 down and 0.75 inches from the right page edge.
 Those dimensions are not set in stone, but page numbers should always be
 placed in the upper right hand corner.
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\begin_layout INT.
DRISKILL HOTEL HALLWAY - DAY
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 walks slowly towards the seminar room.
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
You know, that pronouncement almost seemed godlike.
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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 (V.O.)
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\begin_layout Dialogue
If it were, I probably would have spoken in a voice over and not on the
 phone.
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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 searches the ceiling, trying to decide just where this disembodied voice
 is emanating from.
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
What's a V.O.
 used for?
\end_layout

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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 (V.O.)
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\begin_layout Dialogue
Oftentimes for narration, for a narrator's voice.
 In film noir the protagonists often filled the audience in on their thoughts
 or story details.
 Documentary films are filled with voice over.
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\begin_layout INT.
DRISKILL HOTEL SEMINAR ROOM - DAY
\end_layout

\begin_layout Description
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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 races past 
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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 to reach the podium first.
 
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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 walks slowly past the still-empty chairs.
 
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\begin_layout Description
At the podium 
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reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 gestures with his hands as if he were making a major political speech.
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\begin_layout Description
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

 sneaks up behind him and mimics his movements -- until he notices.
 
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

\end_inset

 spins to confront her.
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\begin_inset CommandInset ref
LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
Why I ought'a \SpecialChar ldots

\end_layout

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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
I was just demonstrating the way many writers break description into shorter
 paragraphs.
 I've seen blocks of description covering an entire page.
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reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
That makes for tough reading, doesn't it?
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reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
I know studio readers who just skip long description and read only dialogue.
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\begin_layout Dialogue
But there are pros who write scripts with extended descriptive passages.
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reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
When you make a half-million or so per script, you can pretty much use any
 format you want.
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 climbs atop the podium.
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
But when you're like me, you have to stick to format.
 Is that what you're trying to say?
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
That's the story.
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\begin_layout Narrative
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reference "Joe"

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 jumps down from the podium and runs out the door just as conference ATTENDEES
 begin to enter.
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\begin_layout Continuing

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\begin_layout Dialogue
By the way, the first time you introduce a speaker in description, you CAP
 his name.
 And when you break dialogue with description, the standard is to place
 "continuing" within parentheses when a speaker chatters on and on.
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reference "April"

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 watches as a number of people sit down before her.
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\begin_layout Continuing

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\begin_layout Dialogue
Of course, many writers have dropped "continuing" from their repertoire.
 I mean, it's obvious that I'm still speaking, isn't it? And that I never
 stopped speaking.
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 (O.S.)
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\begin_layout Parenthetical
shouting from beyond the door
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\begin_layout Dialogue
Hey, 
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset

, c'mon.
 There's a buffet at the hotel and a shuttle leaving in two minutes.
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


\end_layout

\begin_layout Parenthetical
shouting
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\begin_layout Dialogue
We haven't mentioned master scenes.
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\begin_layout Narrative
A sheepish 
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LatexCommand ref
reference "Joe"

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 enters, then glances about the room as he slowly approaches the podium.
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reference "Joe"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
That one I know.
 No CLOSEUPS, no WIDE SHOTS, no shots of any sort.
 Just scene headers, description and dialogue.
 And no scene numbers.
 Those are left to shooting scripts.
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reference "April"

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\begin_layout Dialogue
Don't worry, I would never let you miss a meal.
 Do you know how to make a script sandwich?
\end_layout

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reference "Joe"

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\end_layout

\begin_layout Dialogue
A script sandwich?
\end_layout

\begin_layout Speaker
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LatexCommand ref
reference "April"

\end_inset


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\begin_layout Dialogue
You need your script, two sheets of plain manila binding stock, a three
 hole punch, and three 1.5 inch brass brads.
 No title or name on the binding stock.
 When you get it all assembled, you can hammer the brass brads down to make
 it good and tight.
 Now lets go eat.
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\begin_layout FADE OUT

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\begin_layout Speaker
THE END
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\end_body
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